As the title suggests, this is the second episode of my coming-of-age story. My plan at the time of writing this post is to produce a series of five books, but this will depend on two factors.
1. How well the early books are received.
2. How any feedback affects the detail and content of the successive episodes.
In Part One, ‘Innocence and Inebriation’ Jim Faulkner left a humdrum existence, and as a reserved 17-year-old went out into the world in an unexpected move. He joined the British Army and found himself facing trials and tribulations he’d never before considered.
In Part Two, ‘Paths and Progression’ our young man has congratulated himself on completing basic training, adventure training, and radio training. He’s spent a few months in his first working unit in the UK, and he finds new discoveries and adventures following arrival of the entire unit in Germany.
For the benefit of anyone interested in such detail at this stage, the operator featured on the front cover of this volume is my good mate, and one-time fellow crew member Rod Hogarth. Here, Rod is depicted operating the obsolete B70 SHF radio set, and on this occasion it’s ground-based, mounted on a tripod.
The introductory book of the series was published on 6th January 2016, and has reviews.
The second book has been published a week later than scheduled. It is a larger book than the first, because it focuses on a longer time period
My aim is to produce the next episode in October 2016.
In a blog post last year, I said I’d be revisiting my books to produce updated or revised versions. Whether the idea works or doesn’t, I believe it’s all about knowing whether the book is good enough – or not.
In the case of the book I’m highlighting in this post, the story took me four months to write, and eight months to amend by using my method of leaving it aside for alternate months.
It has taken me two weeks of non-stop effort to revise what has been out there for a couple of years.
I posted a request for opinions on the Facebook page of the Indie Author Support and Discussion group. One of my quandaries was whether or not to produce a banner on the cover when I’d completed my revised work. The general feedback was superb, as expected.
Revision – creates the impression the first version wasn’t good enough.
Edition – creates the impression there might be more in time to come, especially if a date is used in conjunction with the word Edition.
Decision? I’ve abandoned the thought of either Revision or Edition as a banner. I’ve annotateded the blurb with ‘revised and updated – 2016’
It still holds a special place in my heart. The story was intended as a romance rather than a thriller, but during the many rewrites over the year it took to produce the book, action evolved as an underlying theme.
Knowing no better, I thought romance-based thriller might work.
Booklinker(if your country doesn’t support Amazon – Universal)
How has it performed?
It suffered in the early days due to an amateur cover, and because it was my first novel.
I paid to have a professional cover designed which created sales and taught me a valuable lesson. Since publication it would be fair to say it still sells, but not in great numbers.
Three and a half years have passed since first publication, and in that time I’ve learned many lessons.
I’ve written several more novels and I believe I’ve improved my craft.
I enjoy writing other genre, including romance, but my natural territory is action and thriller.
Without doubt, one of the most valuable lessons is to listen to others. Fortunately for me this is something I’ve done throughout my life. It was listening to others which prompted me to read the book again last year, and look closely at the writing – not the story.
How have I dealt with the rewrite of Ten Days in Panama?
As I said I would, I read and made notes from every review, and then amended small points to tidy-up the plot. I had a particular passage brought to my notice by fellow author Julia Lund for which I owe her my thanks. Suffice to say I removed three large paragraphs and replaced them with one small one.
The passage was intended to highlight a fragile aspect of a main character’s psyche, and nobody else had seen it (and reported it) the way Julia did. My amendment to the scene has made the character’s issue apparent, but in a more subtle manner.
Evidence in the form of reviews would suggest the story is enjoyed by those who’ve reviewed, which is great news.
The main characters are well-rounded, readers care about them and how they are drawn together.
The locations, circumstances and imagery appeal to readers.
While they seemed important and strong to me when writing the action scenes, the thriller aspects are undoubtedly playing a supporting role – because whatever my intention, it is a romance.
This particular aspect of the tale was highlighted clearly by an insightful review by blogger, reviewer, writer and friend,Paul Ruddock.
I printed the story to work from hard copy, and I’ve given it the same effort I would afford to a new piece of work. Superfluous words have gone, and there were quite a few. The style is closer to what I would regard as my latest.
Working initially from a printed manuscript I took two weeks to edit, revise and rewrite the story. I’ve remained true to the original plot, however I would suggest it now reads better than previously.
Where do I go from here?
My revised version of the story will now be marketed as romance, rather than thriller.
How will I know if it works?
The first indication will be sales, and then of course any reviews which follow after the re-release in the new genre.
Should I receive good reviews after the revision I have a feeling a sequel will be on the cards. I have ideas in the pipeline, but I’ll have to be sure the characters are strong enough to go on.
I’ve never been to Panama, however during the writing of the story I had incredible support from scientist, writer and dear friend Carmen Lopez. Using information gleaned from Carmen to ensure credibility but avoid legal action, no single character or location is exactly as it appears in reality. As I acknowledge in the front matter, without the aforementioned help, the story would have remained an idea.
In the original version of the story, apart from Panama City and Santiago I replaced the town names with fictional names. At the request of some of the folk who live in the region where the story is set, I have now used the real town names including: Torio,Malena and Coiba Island.
As always, thank you for reading and now without further ado, here is the link to Amazon, and for those unable to use Amazon – Universal – a connection to Booklinker.
P.S. I’ve checked the new sample and found two things.
The first two chapters can be read in their entirety.
Once again, the sample shows the sub-headings in different font sizes, but I’ve seen this occur in many samples. The ePub formatting remains true. 🙂
Like many other writers, I enjoy turning a fresh page, whether it be reading, writing, or turning that page metaphorically. As we approach another year end / beginning, I’m taking a look back at my targets for 2015.
I published A Taste of Honey in December 2014, so I was delighted to begin my new writing year with great reviews of my latest title.
In that happy frame of mind, I set myself the following aims:
1. Update the ‘back pages’ information in all of my books. 2. Read and review more work by the members of the IASD writing group. 3. Step in quietly and offer assistance to new / novice writers wherever possible. 4. Update my author website, creative writer and artist website, and this blog. 5. Attempt a book or series for children. 6. Write a new novel. 7. Write a sequel to one of my present novels. 8. Write another anthology of short stories. 9. Work harder at my ongoing project of my fact-based fiction, coming-of-age story. 10. Work hard to make my blog topics interesting.
How did I do with my ten general topics?
1. I updated the information for the back pages of my published titles, and set out a standard document to make the process simpler as I moved forward.
2. I read and reviewed 15 books in the IASD.
3. I’ve given assistance to three novice authors directly from our group. At the time of writing I am editing a fellow writer’s debut novel. I’ll be formatting the finished manuscript, and producing the cover for him in 2016.
4. I updated my two personal websites and my blog, and in an ongoing effort to streamline and improve them, I’ve gone on to overhaul my secondary website and this blog twice more within the past year.
5. On my first attempt at writing for children, Ifailed on several levels, but rather than dwell on a specialised genre where I recognise I don’t belong, I decided to leave the genre to those who write it well.
6. A fresh novel was beginning to look like another thriller, but I decided to throw caution to the wind and based on the success of my erotica anthology – I wrote a novel in the same genre.
9. My fact-based fiction novel is now taking shape as my first attempt at a series. It is presently intended to be a five-part story. The first book is ready to be formatted. A Life of Choice – Part One will be published on Amazon in January 2016.
10. I’ve written blog articles on marketing, blogging, writing anthologies, and a few other topics. My official followers have now risen to the dizzy heights of 170+.
What else have I been up to?
I had an article in Writing Magazine in March, highlighting my writing successes to date.
I wroteGoals, a short story for the charity anthology, You’re Not Alone, being produced by Ian D Moore. Stories from 28members of the IASD were included and it went live on Amazon in July.
Since October, I’ve been working hard on the IASD website with fellow Admin guys, Paul Ruddock andIan D Moore. The restructuring is complete and the new, improved version of our website will be posted for public viewing in January, complete with our first Featured Author of 2016.
I’ve signed up to another couple of websites too, but whether they will prove useful in the long run is hard to predict.
My most recent trial has been signing up to BookLinker. This is a site where a regular Amazon URL can be transformed into a ‘universal’ link. I’ve been using the links on Facebook and I’ll be reporting my findings in January 2016.
That’s about it for this year, so I’d like to say a sincere thank you to all who have played a part in my writing journey over the past 12 months, whether it be in buying my titles, reviewing, offering advice, reading my blog, or any number of other things.
Have a great end to the holiday season, thank you for checking out my scribbles again, and I’ll see you all in 2016 with a new set of projects.