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Progress and Pleasure

On By TomIn Achievement, author honesty, author ideas, beta readers, collections, editing, General, Insight, killing your darlings, Novel, reading, series, thriller, work in progress, writing2 Comments

MacLennan has been one of those stories that started well, then, like a fighter jet in a climb, stalled and, for a while, looked like it would come screaming back to earth. Fortunately, having been trained to deal with such frightening situations (the story stalling, not the jet), I fought the controls, and moments before I blacked out from the G-force, I pulled out of the dive and flew on to continue the mission.

Apart from amending both the strap line and the blurb, the more astute among you will have noticed that I’ve also changed the spelling from McLennan to MacLennan. There is a reason for the specific spelling, and it is revealed within the story. 

The first draft is now complete, at 120,000 words, so the easy part is done. I’m certain that when I’ve reread from the beginning, and made copious separate notes, the word count will reduce and increase with each successive edit. Fellow authors familiar with my method and work will know that I don’t set a tight publication deadline, so the ballpark date is late March/early April 2026.

What was the secret weapon that brought me back from the headache of rewriting scenes and switching characters in and out?

Two things brought the story clearly into focus, and both were character-related.

The first was the introduction of Helen, whom the main character meets early in the story. She, in turn, takes an interest in his situation, and by coincidence, she has a contact who regularly deals with such issues as MacLennan’s. I was reminded of when I wrote Crusader, and how Constance captured my imagination when she came on the scene.

Suffice to say, that once again, I’ve employed a blend of fast-paced action and violence, combined with brief periods of a more settled nature. Importantly, as the tale developed, I began to enjoy it more, and for me, that is crucial. If I don’t find pleasure in the writing, the end product won’t work for readers. Fans of my Beyond The Law trilogy and the spin-offs will be pleased to know that a few old (and young) favourites make an appearance.

As I said earlier in this post, the easy part is now done, so over the following three months, I’ll reread the manuscript, edit it, print it, reread it, edit it again, rest it, and continue with that sequence until I feel it’s ready for beta readers to both enjoy and dissect for feedback.

For anyone interested in seeing how MacLennan gets underway, I’ve updated the first chapter here on my blog. As a guide, Chapter 1 – The Invisible Man is 3,200 words, so about the equivalent of a short story.

Yes, Codename: Larkspur is an addition to my Work in Progress list, and another spin-off from my BTL ‘universe’ as Rudders refers to the stories. I aim to produce an introductory chapter soon to offer a flavour of how Helen evolved to become Larkspur.

As always, comments are welcome, and thank you for reading.

Spoiled for Choice

On By TomIn Achievement, author honesty, author ideas, collections, General, Insight, military, military career, Novel, paperback, paperbacks, Poetry, Promotion, reading, relaxation, sci-fi, self-publishing, series, thriller, trilogy, Unofficial autobiography, work in progress, writing

I started this year by returning to Selena: Sea Nymph, which I still find a challenge, which is just as it should be. I am, however, already ten chapters (30k words) in with McLennan, my next thriller.

To date, I’ve never considered myself to be affected by ‘Writer’s Block’ because, for many years, I’ve maintained multiple projects. I always have a primary Work in Progress and at least one (but usually two) other writing projects.

Some authors say they can’t move from one story to another, but I rest my work often and for long enough to make this possible and desirable. When I ‘rest’ my work it can be for two weeks or more. Apart from reading and reviewing, I might draw, paint, bake, complete a domestic project (like building a new garden gate or bird table), or head off with our caravan. Whatever else I do, there is always the need to write.

Within weeks of this new year beginning, I was making a list of possible content for A Life of Choice: The Retail Years,* which is a follow-up to my popular A Life of Choice series.

As recently as this week, while revising poems in my Natural History volume, I considered it might be worthwhile to produce a paperback edition. Poetry: Volume 3 – Natural History contains 45 poems, so I believe it would need to be increased to at least 60 or 70 poems to work as a paperback.

The new verses are underway, and when they’re ready, I’ll add them to the digital edition and also create the paperback. Apart from my Light at The End books, my natural history writing is possibly the only genre I’d recommend for those under 18.

Proposed cover, but it may change.

However things work out, I’m confident that this year, I’ll produce at least one new title and possibly a second. 

 I sincerely thank my regular readers for taking an interest and supporting my brand. If you’re new to my writing, I hope you’ll soon become one of my valued readers. Thank you for checking out my blog.

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*A Life of Choice: The Retail Years. The Foreword and first chapter, 1. One Door Closes are available in my Work in Progress menu.